The windows of thy soul,
Thrown wide open,
To the Sun.
Pray do not fancy,
This for a Pun!
The Sun hath rays,
Bright and warm,
Risen in the East,
Such is thy norm.
Flip thy hair,
Giveth a spun.
Smile while ye sparkle,
Bright in the Sun.
The windows of thy Soul,
Thrown wide open,
To the Sun.
Pray do not fancy,
This for a Pun!
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Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United
Spinning and sparkling in the sun really does sound quite fun!
Hello Jaerose,
So glad you liked it! Lol yeah it is!
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So inspiring!
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Hello Alia,
Thank you! Appreciated.
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Sounds like song! I love the picture too 🙂
Hello Humbird,
Thank you so much! Yes its lyrical poetry. Glad you liked it.
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It’s good as well as fun to give the soul a sun bath at times. You gave this poem a very convincing sparkle. YAY!
Hello Susan,
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it. Lol yeah I agree! Yayyyy 😀
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Enchanting, like a poem from one of the old masters!
Hello Sherry,
Glad you liked it! Yes my poems are inspired from Old poets.. just love them!
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I love the open heart chakra feeling that this portion brings,
“The windows of thy Soul,
Thrown wide open,
To the Sun.”
Beautifully expanding!
Hello Hannah,
Thank you so much dear! Yes I simply love expressing through poetry!
Highly appreciated.
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Perhaps it was not so long ago that mankind in their wisdom worshiped the sun for the obvious benefits it bestowed on them. But foolishly we wanted more and now look where we are. How right you are to say “Smile while ye sparkle”.
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love your language with a prayer like flavor and also the beautiful brightness…
Hello Sumana,
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!
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Enchanting..That golden orb can actually create the magic…lovely write!
Hello Panchali,
Thank you so much!Glad you liked it!
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so much warmth in this… the sun def. sprinkles some magic on us…
Hello Claudia,
So kind of you dear!
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Nice ~ I specially admire this part:
The windows of thy Soul,
Thrown wide open,
To the Sun.
Hello Grace,
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.
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a song for the sun. keep shining, keep spinning 🙂
Hello Totomai,
So nice of you to stop by! Thank you so much for your kind words!
Highly appreciated.
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Absolutely love the positive rays in this poem. Filled with a thanksgiving and delight…
Eileen
Hello Eileen,
Thank you so much for your kind words!
Highly appreciated, thanks for stopping by!
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A fun light (no pun intended) poem. Very nice.
Hello Mr Meisner,
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A fun to read piece. I’d like to be basking in some sun right now!
Hello Jennifer,
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This poem was fun. I like the idea of opening up the windows of our souls, then spin in the sun. Light does us good. Enjoyed your poem.
Hello Myrna,
Thank you so much! Means alot to me. Glad you enjoyed reading my poem! 😀
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