Travelling through the tunnel of time;
Pondering upon its measure, design.
Letting the voice of reason chime;
Travelling through the tunnel of time.
Like hands of Nature adorn our prime;
In swirls of doubt, offer a sign.
Travelling through the tunnel of time;
Pondering upon its measure, design.
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Form: Triolet
There is so much for a person to ponder as they move through the tunnel of time! Each person’s journey definitely has its own design…
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Time is such a precious gift that we mustn’t hide it away but use it everyday.
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I love the way it makes you feel captured in a vault of time, almost tangible presence with this.
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This beautiful triolet of time travel has the motion of a smooth sail…”Pondering upon its measure, design. / Letting the voice of reason chime;” make it all the more enjoyable…
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Amazing!! poem and again I see a new style of the poem, the repetition of a particular line adds so much of beauty!!
Whole life is what but a time spent and whenever in doubt or difficult nature does gives a sign.
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Time is definitely a dynamic force; luv your repetitive form
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I love the pattern in this beautiful poem…like time itself it flows in a loop…
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A nice pattern of repetition!
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We are time travelers whether or not we ever leave our own time and it is part of our health that we think, ponder, question. Lovely. This poem’s simplicity hides its complexity. Bravo!
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It creates a spell
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We can really never measure or fathom the design of time…A wonderful poem that makes you think about the enigma called Time π
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I love the rhythm, rhyme and meter of this poem, very much. Love the “tunnel of time” analogy.
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Great rhyming pattern and message indeed, time is everything. Well done. Enjoy the rest of the week, take care!
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That tunnel winds in so many directions. It is good to ponder it, to learn from it and to keep going in it. Good write Sanaa.
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I think you’ve captured our movement through time really well here π
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The triolet worked nicely in keeping time for your verse Sanaa. I like the symbol of the tunnel- does it contain constrain or direct?
Well plotted journey. Also loved the visual – makes the poem.
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PS: The tunnel directs our journey through the course of time π
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The image helps to give depth to your poem..Destiny lies ahead; one-way only…and bound by time.
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Nice Triolet and the picture is lovely!
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Time taunts; time tempts us to that tangle; time tampers
Seems we’re all thinking of time… lately, Smiles_! _m
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Pondering and racing against it is always a favorite pastime! A time tunnel makes it mysterious! Wonderful lines Sanaa!
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Like the triolet form….suits the rhythm of relentless time. Well done !
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Loved the rhyming pattern in it…profound words, too… π
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And that tunnel takes us on an amazing journey. One never knows what is just beyond the horizon or around the next curve.
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This is really a thought provoker. Well written.
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“In swirls of doubt, offer a sign.”
This is a great line, doubt is undoubtedly like a whirlpool and once you get caught up in it it’s hard to get out.
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Ah! When I was young I lived watching a program called “The Time Tunnel” – it is indeed a great image. Nice one.
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I love a triolet, and with the sounds of wheels the repetions get even better.
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The beauty of traveling through that tunnel is this: Every mile/kilometer is an opportunity to learn, to grow, to love.
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2nd line gave me the shivers… Beautiful work!
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Ah, time triolet. Lovely reflection–
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I love the image of a time tunnel⦠I always think of time as a spiral and your concept feels akin. Beautifully written.
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This is so moving, succint yet insightful….Loved it.
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