Time

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Travelling through the tunnel of time;
Pondering upon its measure, design.
Letting the voice of reason chime;
Travelling through the tunnel of time.

Like hands of Nature adorn our prime;
In swirls of doubt, offer a sign.
Travelling through the tunnel of time;
Pondering upon its measure, design.

 

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Form: Triolet

Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United

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64 thoughts on “Time

  1. Mary says:

    There is so much for a person to ponder as they move through the tunnel of time! Each person’s journey definitely has its own design…

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  2. Sumana Roy says:

    This beautiful triolet of time travel has the motion of a smooth sail…”Pondering upon its measure, design. / Letting the voice of reason chime;” make it all the more enjoyable…

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  3. vandana says:

    Amazing!! poem and again I see a new style of the poem, the repetition of a particular line adds so much of beauty!!

    Whole life is what but a time spent and whenever in doubt or difficult nature does gives a sign.

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  4. Susan says:

    We are time travelers whether or not we ever leave our own time and it is part of our health that we think, ponder, question. Lovely. This poem’s simplicity hides its complexity. Bravo!

    I’m wondering why your site doesn’t retain my login info? Each time I have to fill out the form anew. No problem, I just wonder.

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  5. L. Moon says:

    The triolet worked nicely in keeping time for your verse Sanaa. I like the symbol of the tunnel- does it contain constrain or direct?
    Well plotted journey. Also loved the visual – makes the poem.
    XO

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  6. Vincent says:

    “In swirls of doubt, offer a sign.”
    This is a great line, doubt is undoubtedly like a whirlpool and once you get caught up in it it’s hard to get out.

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