Spread the love
With time
Relationship
Will continue to bloom
Though obstacles stand in between
Fervent
Photo Credits:Β wallpaper-download.net
Form: Cinquain
Posted on Sunday Mini-Challenge @ Real Toads
and posted on the Poetry Pantry @ Poets United
Love this, Sanaa…the optimism in this and the message inherent even in the brevity of the cinquain. Lovely.
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A very cute cinquain–the couple that persists against obstacles must be fervent indeed. Thanks, Sanaa. k.
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a great truth effortlessly expressed in so few words…a lovely write Sanaa…
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Time is the ultimate touchstone.
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Beautiful, Sanaa. This is so true. I loved the form of the poem. Have a great Sunday π
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Those obstacles should be viewed as blessings, opportunities to improve.. That’s what a relationship should be.
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True love is a formidable beast and will battle all foes.
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You have captured the fervour of making the most of time.
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Time are fuel in the fire of relationships, indeed. And sometime, it’s wind gust… But we always have the choice of how we guide this forces.
Such a tasty wee bit.
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If you work at it…
time alone will not make a good soup,
it has to have the right ingredients in it.
What we allow into our marriage/love
and what we take out – def makes all
the difference.
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and may it be so.. lovely.
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So true Sanaa, challenges will always be there in every relationship ~ It is up to us to let it continually bloom ~
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Ah, a relationship can survive obstacles…if both people wish it to survive & put in the effort.
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Time is everything, love develops and reality sets in. Greetings!
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Obstacles are recipe for a much flavorful relationship, Sanaa. it takes time to learn the pros and cons π
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Excellent – I think short verse is amazing. It says so much with so little.
Classic Sunny one!!!
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I think we forget that time and love and work cover a lot of ground in a relationship–loved this beautiful write
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No obstacle too steep, if the will is there!
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Marvelous Cinquain….time is so important for relationships and knowing there will be obstacles.
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Time tests us all, doesn’t it? The form your verse takes looks to me like a solid tree that could truely bloom for many years.
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Beautiful.
Thanks for your kind comment.
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Yes, it always seems there are things that get in the way.
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Obstacles often demand thought, choice, and change. That often can lead to growth,
Elizabeth
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A lovely cinquain…
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So true it takes time and fervor to develop a good relationship ~ obstacles can indeed make it stronger ~ a wise cinquain π
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Such a beautiful expression of truth
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Time is the essence for it is given all the chances to make good!
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neat little cinquain. nicely done. π
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Your cinquain ends on a very adamant note Sanaa; thanks for sharing at Monday WRites today
much love…
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Cool form and a wise perspective. An awesome little Cinquain.
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You have captured the very essence of a relationship….so nicely penned!
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Yes we should be fervent to keep our love strong.
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The word fervent is so planted and grounded that I believe you.
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Obstacles often make relationships stronger. Very nice!
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Sweet, precise, and well written!
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A beautiful snapshot of time and blooming love…. β₯
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How lovely, Sanaa! Keep blooming.
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