This poem is an idea;
This poem talks about love.
This poem is a silver bullet.
This poem is open to numerous ideas;
Ideas are water and ideas are wings.
Ideas somewhat can humble a being;
Ideas shall help fulfill our dreams.
Ideas no matter how odd or even;
Flow through mind like river stream.
This poem talks about aspects of love;
I heard that love is a battlefield.
It requires a certain amount of hope;
Through difficult times we learn to cope.
For love is but a growing garland;
Its not for sale nor up for bargain.
This poem is like a silver bullet;
Aiming straight towards the heart.
Sooner or later the clouds shall part;
In constant stars we read such art.
Inspiring us all to reach out and touch;
To believe in oneself right from the start.
This poem has spoken about ideas;
This poem strives to honor love.
This poem has shot a silver bullet.
Form: Boomerang Metaphors
Posted for Play it again @ Real Toads
also on Poetry Pantry @ Poets United
I tried the etheree, never written one before, enjoyed your silver bullet metaphor, the repetition and the reasoning
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PS: The Etheree was wonderful 🙂
Very incisive write Sanaa and great word craft in beautiful poetic language!
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Really enjoyed “In constant stars we read such art.
Inspiring us all to reach out and touch;
To believe in oneself right from the start”
Our own self doubt can do us in, a monster perhaps more fearsome than a werewolf (of which silver bullets are supposed to be able to kill )
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This is a dream poem Sanaa, you’ve hit the bull’s eye…love your silver bullet…
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I like the lines about “Ideas are water and ideas are wings.” they certainly can take you anywhere. just like how a poem can be interpreted in many ways. (I am still wondering, why a silver bullet?) 🙂
enjoyed the read.
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A brilliant read indeed and a delightful read. Greetings!
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This is a lovely write Sanaa – full of hope on love.
Love can be an idea too 🙂
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I love the brisk confidence in the poem. It is very good indeed.
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This poem did indeed fire a silver bullet – in thought, and image and meaning…all in your unique and sunny way..perfect!
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Some nice lines in this poem. I like especially the metaphoric use of the ‘silver bullet’ and the word repetitions you used throughout.
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I like all the things your poem is!
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And this poem has touched my heart. Beautifully expressed!
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You handled those metaphors well.
You are so adventurous.
Well done Sunny one.
hope the day is a beautiful one for you and your family.
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This poem is like a battle cry for lovers. Really stirring to the emotions.
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Very nicely written, Sanaa. I enjoyed these lines:
Inspiring us all to reach out and touch;
To believe in oneself right from the start.
You gave a feeling we should all try to hold on to 🙂
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So well done–the piece just flies!
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You definitely shot me with your silver bullet, Sanaa! Love the purity of heart so openly displayed in this piece… With Best Wishes Scott x
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I love Hannah’s form poem and you have rendered a beautiful example. Just lovely.
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This is a wonderful form to speak of love; everything connected, a bit wild, and unexpected… but always fitting as it should. ♥
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Very much like what you did with the form. It engenders thought and pulls your reader in,
Elizabeth
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Sanaa, this poem you’ve written is beautiful. It is the silver bullet and my heart has felt it.
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And what a beautiful silver bullet it is…
‘For love is but a growing garland;
Its not for sale nor up for bargain.’
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“Flow through mind like river stream.”
“Sooner or later the clouds shall part;
In constant stars we read such art.”
I love these lines and what you did with the Boomerang!! What a fun and moving read! 🙂
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Very cool use of the boomerang form (which I love)……..you are so beautiful in your photo, Sanaa……..wow!!!!
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Wonderful extended metaphor. A beautifully crafted piece, Sanaa!
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What a super emotive Boomerang!
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I enjoyed your poem and I love these lines:
“This poem is like a silver bullet;
Aiming straight towards the heart.
Sooner or later the clouds shall part;
In constant stars we read such art.”
Lovely!
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I especially like the stanza comparing love to and idea.
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In the “ideas” stanza, I love the contrast between ideas being water and having wings, between ideas being odd and being even. Great juxtapositions.
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Oh, that’s wonderful, Sanaa! You have really used this intriguing form to its highest potential.
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Sanaa, thanks for linking up at Monday WRites
much love…
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A wonderful poem I always enjoy reading this style.
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This is beautiful. You have mastered the boomerang metaphor.
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I love this, gorgeous! Your poetry gets more & more beautiful 🙂
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You used this form beautifully. Love the last few lines.
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‘Ideas are water and ideas are wings.’ Love this.
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This poem has shot a silver bullet…. a strong close.
Thank you kindly, Rajani ❤️