This poem is an idea, love and a silver bullet.

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This poem is an idea;
This poem talks about love.
This poem is a silver bullet.

This poem is open to numerous ideas;
Ideas are water and ideas are wings.
Ideas somewhat can humble a being;
Ideas shall help fulfill our dreams.
Ideas no matter how odd or even;
Flow through mind like river stream.

This poem talks about aspects of love;
I heard that love is a battlefield.
It requires a certain amount of hope;
Through difficult times we learn to cope.
For love is but a growing garland;
Its not for sale nor up for bargain.

This poem is like a silver bullet;
Aiming straight towards the heart.
Sooner or later the clouds shall part;
In constant stars we read such art.
Inspiring us all to reach out and touch;
To believe in oneself right from the start.

This poem has spoken about ideas;
This poem strives to honor love.
This poem has shot a silver bullet.

 

 

Form: Boomerang MetaphorsΒ 

Posted for Play it again @ Real Toads

also on Poetry Pantry @ Poets United

74 Replies to “This poem is an idea, love and a silver bullet.”

  1. I tried the etheree, never written one before, enjoyed your silver bullet metaphor, the repetition and the reasoning

    Have a good Saturday
    Much love…

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  2. Really enjoyed “In constant stars we read such art.
    Inspiring us all to reach out and touch;
    To believe in oneself right from the start”

    Our own self doubt can do us in, a monster perhaps more fearsome than a werewolf (of which silver bullets are supposed to be able to kill )

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  3. I like the lines about “Ideas are water and ideas are wings.” they certainly can take you anywhere. just like how a poem can be interpreted in many ways. (I am still wondering, why a silver bullet?) πŸ™‚
    enjoyed the read.

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  4. Some nice lines in this poem. I like especially the metaphoric use of the ‘silver bullet’ and the word repetitions you used throughout.

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  5. Very nicely written, Sanaa. I enjoyed these lines:

    Inspiring us all to reach out and touch;
    To believe in oneself right from the start.

    You gave a feeling we should all try to hold on to πŸ™‚

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  6. “Flow through mind like river stream.”
    “Sooner or later the clouds shall part;
    In constant stars we read such art.”

    I love these lines and what you did with the Boomerang!! What a fun and moving read! πŸ™‚

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  7. I enjoyed your poem and I love these lines:
    “This poem is like a silver bullet;
    Aiming straight towards the heart.
    Sooner or later the clouds shall part;
    In constant stars we read such art.”

    Lovely!

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  8. In the “ideas” stanza, I love the contrast between ideas being water and having wings, between ideas being odd and being even. Great juxtapositions.

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