The River

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Shall we head up to the river?
Flowing crystal tide.
Its surface reflective as a mirror.

Perch, ruffe, trout reside;
Choose a fishing rod and reel.
Up-to the margin of the river stride.

This atmosphere surreal;
The two of us together.
Our mind questioning if it’s real?

An autumn gust blows;
Crisp copper leaves.
The precise moment, he proposed.

Shall we head up to the river?
A moment deep, that chants forever.

 

 

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Form: Terza Rima

Posted for Poetry Pantry @ Poets United

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  1. Mary says:

    Well, admittedly I would rather head DOWN the river than up! I used to do some canoeing and found going up river very challenging. Hopefully, as in your poem, going up river with a loved one might make the journey easier. Smiles!

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  2. Sherry Blue Sky says:

    Love the image of two people going to the river………and it sounds like there was a ring and a proposal in that poem……….lovely, that “moment deep, that chants forever.”

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  3. Eileen T O'Neill says:

    Sanaa,
    It is lovely to have a little corner of the world, to call special. A place with fond memories and a place where you can just feel as one, when there…Lovely sharing poem.

    Eileen

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  4. Myrna says:

    By all means, we must head up the river. Lovely poem Sanaa. I also enjoyed the sounds of the river. So calming. Thank you for this treat.

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  5. Sage says:

    From the end of the old gospel song, “Shall We Gather at the River”:

    Soon we’ll reach the silver river,
    Soon our pilgrimage will cease;
    Soon our happy hearts will quiver
    With the melody of peace.

    I live for flowing water–whether it be tides or rivers running downstream.

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