Sentiments

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With my eyes shut tight, I pictured marigold
yellow, and oh tangerine blossoms bursting;
soon after, I figured it was but the onset of
love.
๐Ÿ’ž
Poinsettias poise with drops of morning rain
I look towards the sky as the wind around me
whispers, the only sound which I hear is your
name.
๐Ÿ’ž
You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page
Your verse entangles with both hope and desire
You are mystic incantations of whispered love.
๐Ÿ’ž
The cocktail of your beauty, arousal and the
nervousness with a twist ofย burning curiosity’s
intoxicating as dusk fallsย with draping shadows.
๐Ÿ’ž
I would live a thousand lives a thousand times
Even go through the process of bliss and pain,
Just to have another chance with you again.

 

Photo credits:ย www.hdnicewallpapers.com

Form: Twitter Poetry i.e. in 140 characters.

Posted on celebrations @ dVerse Pub

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Posted on Poetry Pantry @ Poets United

 

52 thoughts on “Sentiments

  1. Grace says:

    Love the lyrical verses filled with hope, anticipation and mystic incantations of whispered love. That last stanza is my favorite. Thanks for joining us Sanaa ~

  2. Kim M. Russell says:

    Beautiful and lyrical, Sanaa. I like the way you have used alliteration and assonance to create an image of lips kissing in the line: ‘ Poinsettias poise with drops of morning rain’ and metaphors and simile in ‘You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page/Your verse entangles with both hope and desire’. And you’ve written each stanza in 140 characters!
    Superb! Much love, Kim xx

  3. kaykuala h says:

    I would live a thousand lives a thousand times
    Just to have another chance with you again.

    How very sweet when one is with a loved one. The world opens up to a lot of eventualities!

    Hank

  4. Vinay Leo R. says:

    “You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page
    Your verse entangles with both hope and desire
    You are mystic incantations of whispered love.”

    This is marvellous ๐Ÿ™‚ my favorite lines from this piece, Sanaa.

  5. Jae Rose says:

    I love the imagery in the opening verses — the colours and smells intoxicating – who wouldn’t want to go back and have them again.. you are a true romantic ๐Ÿ™‚ โค๏ธ

  6. patchouli moonflower says:

    What a gorgeous line: “You are mystic incantations of whispered love.”

    Fantastic stanza:
    “The cocktail of your beauty, arousal and the
    nervousness with a twist of burning curiosityโ€™s
    intoxicating as dusk falls with draping shadows.”

    I enjoyed this very much.

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