Sentiments

Spread the love

With my eyes shut tight, I pictured marigold
yellow, and oh tangerine blossoms bursting;
soon after, I figured it was but the onset of
love.
💞
Poinsettias poise with drops of morning rain
I look towards the sky as the wind around me
whispers, the only sound which I hear is your
name.
💞
You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page
Your verse entangles with both hope and desire
You are mystic incantations of whispered love.
💞
The cocktail of your beauty, arousal and the
nervousness with a twist of burning curiosity’s
intoxicating as dusk falls with draping shadows.
💞
I would live a thousand lives a thousand times
Even go through the process of bliss and pain,
Just to have another chance with you again.

 

Photo credits: www.hdnicewallpapers.com

Form: Twitter Poetry i.e. in 140 characters.

Posted on celebrations @ dVerse Pub

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Posted on Poetry Pantry @ Poets United

 

52 Replies to “Sentiments”

  1. Love the lyrical verses filled with hope, anticipation and mystic incantations of whispered love. That last stanza is my favorite. Thanks for joining us Sanaa ~

  2. Beautiful and lyrical, Sanaa. I like the way you have used alliteration and assonance to create an image of lips kissing in the line: ‘ Poinsettias poise with drops of morning rain’ and metaphors and simile in ‘You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page/Your verse entangles with both hope and desire’. And you’ve written each stanza in 140 characters!
    Superb! Much love, Kim xx

  3. I would live a thousand lives a thousand times
    Just to have another chance with you again.

    How very sweet when one is with a loved one. The world opens up to a lot of eventualities!

    Hank

  4. “You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page
    Your verse entangles with both hope and desire
    You are mystic incantations of whispered love.”

    This is marvellous 🙂 my favorite lines from this piece, Sanaa.

  5. I love the imagery in the opening verses — the colours and smells intoxicating – who wouldn’t want to go back and have them again.. you are a true romantic 🙂 ❤️

  6. What a gorgeous line: “You are mystic incantations of whispered love.”

    Fantastic stanza:
    “The cocktail of your beauty, arousal and the
    nervousness with a twist of burning curiosity’s
    intoxicating as dusk falls with draping shadows.”

    I enjoyed this very much.

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