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  1. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Love this… so short and sweet… and sour lips needs saccharine

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

      1. Bjorn Rudberg says:

        Love a good revisit… πŸ™‚ also like the fuchsia morn.

        1. Sanaa says:

          Thanks for stopping by, Bjorn πŸ˜€

  2. De Jackson says:

    Oh, I love that “fuchsia morn,” especially!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  3. So much in so few words. Wonderful piece of writing .. lips somewhat sour ..unfurl like petals. Brilliant!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aw!❀️ Thank you so much, Paul πŸ˜€ so nice to see you!❀️

  4. paul scribbles says:

    wow…so sensual…wonderfully evocative poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Paul πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  5. Erbiage says:

    Oh, drink me in! Lovely verse, really The picture embodies it too

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww!❀️ Thank you so much, Eric πŸ˜€ so nice to see you ❀️

  6. Lovely, sensual, personal–right on. Nice dip into cool brevity & saunter beyond the darkness of days.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Glenn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  7. lillian says:

    stirred as though potpourri of verse……..LOVELY image!
    I enjoyed this one very much, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aw!❀️ Thank you so much, Lillian πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ❀️

  8. barbara says:

    Very sensual, even with the twist of sweet and sour. Always lovely! πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Barbara πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  9. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice sensuous sounding poem. You got the first two words from the list right at the beginning. I liked the sour lips and sweet touch.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Frank πŸ˜€ so nice to see you ❀️

  10. Janice says:

    Very nice. I was particularly grabbed by ‘as though potpourri of verse’.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Janice πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  11. Walter Marks says:

    It sounds to me like she was seduced by lies and bad wine. A good use of the prompt.

    1. Sanaa says:

      It could be that. Thanks for stopping by, Walter πŸ™‚

  12. kanzensakura says:

    I love the fuschia morn…lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Toni πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  13. This reads so sensual. Well done. πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Arcadia Maria πŸ˜€ so nice to see you ❀️

  14. Truedessa says:

    This is a lovely write, lips may be sour, but a bit of sugar goes a long way πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Truedessa πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  15. Kathy Reed says:

    Great response to the prompt; sensual and intimate…love it!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kathy πŸ˜€ so nice to see you ❀️

  16. Oh Lord.. other
    than the fake
    taste/news
    of saccharine
    spoiLing the
    loveLY
    wine
    oF sugar
    bliss.. i’Ve
    reAlly misSed
    your poetry.. Sanaa..
    thanks so much for it..
    and.. so nice to see you again..:)

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Katie πŸ˜€ good to see you too! ❀️

  17. oh my, this poem is gorgeous!
    evoked many mental images.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Stacy πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  18. LadyInRead says:

    ‘potpourri of verse’ – that sounds wonderful indeed

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Vidya πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rosemary πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Annell πŸ˜€ so nice to see you!❀️

  19. gillena says:

    Sanaa
    I am definitely a dawn person, so I Luv the image of

    “fuchsia morn’s lured”

    Thanks for linking to Monday WRites

    Much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

      Much love…❀️

  20. Such a romantic unfurling of petals, Sanaa. I love the ‘potpourri of verse’ and the saccharine touch.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ❀️

  21. vandana says:

    I’m seduced by the words that flow in this poem, a beautiful write πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Vandana πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  22. Kerry says:

    An interesting contrast between the sweet and sour in this relationship.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry πŸ™‚ so good to see you ❀️

  23. A “potpourri of verse”. How delicious, Sanaa. Especially when followed by lips.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Magaly πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ❀️

  24. Paul says:

    Delicate, intimate, delicious.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Paul πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  25. Thotpurge says:

    Potpourri of verse is gorgeous…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rajani πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  26. Gorgeous….sensual!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sreeja πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

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