Rain

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You fell on me
like drops of rain
when I walked in
flames of hot despair.

 

 

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For my prompt “Rain showers my spirit and waters my Soul” tomorrow at
8:00 am EDT.

Posted on poems written on Prompt Nights

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and on Open Link Night @ dVerse Poets Pub

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60 Replies to “Rain”

  1. I liked the contrasting sensations of the cold rain, and the flames of despair. Totally mimics the contradictory feelings you get when hanging out with an unrequited crush. And the feelings of nerves in general. Cold, ticklish sweat on your face, uncontrollable blushing, the heat of embarrassment prickling your limbs… aaaghhh. Too real

  2. Now, I know that I usually like conciseness in a poem, but this one left me wanting more. I could imagine it being the opening to a longer poem. Please, pretty please?

    1. Hello Marina,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

      PS: Aww ❤ I will try expanding it 😀

    1. Hello Silver Gardenia,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

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