Rain

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You fell on me
like drops of rain
when I walked in
flames of hot despair.

 

 

Photo credits: giphy.com

For my prompt “Rain showers my spirit and waters my Soul” tomorrow at
8:00 am EDT.

Posted on poems written on Prompt Nights

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  1. I liked the contrasting sensations of the cold rain, and the flames of despair. Totally mimics the contradictory feelings you get when hanging out with an unrequited crush. And the feelings of nerves in general. Cold, ticklish sweat on your face, uncontrollable blushing, the heat of embarrassment prickling your limbs… aaaghhh. Too real

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  2. Such, an interesting photo (which, I love), to accompany, your words, Sanaa, contrasting fire and water.

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  3. Now, I know that I usually like conciseness in a poem, but this one left me wanting more. I could imagine it being the opening to a longer poem. Please, pretty please?

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