Perchance

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Soon
perchance
silently
she thought, smiling
in the month of June
Planting chrysanthemums
longing to hear his deep voice
She missed him more with each goodbye
blowing kisses up the moonless sky
In hopes to meet again, make absence sweet.

Form: Etheree

Photo credits: www.aliexpress.com

Posted for Poetics @ dVerse Pub

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& Poetry Pantry @ Poets United

68 thoughts on “Perchance

  1. therisa says:

    A soft sigh of longing
    Caress one’s heart
    Like a gentle touch
    Of long lost lover.

    Who has
    Just returned
    In her heart.

    Sanaa, when I read your poem and the painting, you have chosen, these are, the words that speak to me, in response.

  2. B. E. Adalgari says:

    I love the warm, earthy image of the woman planting chrysanthemums in her garden, contrasted with the ethereal, romantic abstraction of her lovelorn thoughts drifting to her absent lover, and his deep voice. Also wonderful: the image of blowing kisses to the moonless sky– the new moon the perfect symbol of absence, but also the promise of recurrence; of many meetings and partings.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello B.E Adalgari,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Matthew,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  3. lillian says:

    I love the word “perchance” — somehow it has a gentleness to it….a wistfulness. Lovely poem this is. What a lovely first read, coming back from my 5 day family trip! Thank you, Sanaa! PS: take a look at my post at the bar, after my thanks to Abhra — I shared my grandaughter’s etheree 🙂 should make you smile! Poetry from a 9 year old 🙂

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Lillian,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

      PS: I ll be right there 🙂

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  4. katiemiafrederick says:

    Perhaps.. the saddest
    thing about retirement
    or even children is
    Lovers and
    even friends
    can become
    sibling rivals..
    i suppose humans
    are made to miss the other more
    than count on ever presence.. ah..
    effervescence off miSSinG Love..:)

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Vivienne,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Bryan,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Totomai,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Scott,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  5. gillena says:

    Your Etheree is lovely and whimsical. The stuff of day dreams and concrete wishes rolled into one

    I have never written in this form. I will try it

    Thank you for dropping in at my Sunday Lime today

    Much love…

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Jae Rose,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Kerry,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Slarueb,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Audrey,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Old Egg,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  6. Wendy Bourke says:

    A lovely, tenderly rendered piece. “blowing kisses up the moonless sky
    In hopes to meet again, make absence sweet.” … sigh – so true – if only blown kisses and wishes could make such things so.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Elizabeth,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Luk Lei,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Dsnake,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

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