One Last Try

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Last day of marriage;
Divorce papers on desk.
Everything is a blur;
Seeming so grotesque.

Let’s give it;
One last try.
Come on baby;
Don’t you cry!

The judge is waiting;
Reading our terms.
Standing beside you;
Feeling you squirm.

Let’s give it;
One last try.
Come on baby;
Don’t you cry!

Never too late;
To turn back now.
Promise to fulfill;
All our vows.

Let’s give it;
One last try.
Come on baby;
Don’t you cry!

A sigh of relief;
The defer of decree.
The courtΒ thusΒ awaits;
Until both have agreed.

Let’s give it;
One last try.
Come on baby;
Don’t you cry!

 

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Posted for Poems in April @ Real Toads

Inspiration from Daughtry’s song – Its not over

24 Replies to “One Last Try”

  1. Luv the repeating verse, like a chorus. And there is a nice music quality in the meter. I could listen to this as a song

    Nice one

    Much love…

    1. Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it dear πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love
      xoxo

    1. Hello Sumana,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it dear πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love
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    1. Hello Manicddaily,

      Thank you so much πŸ˜€ Enjoyed this prompt a lot!
      Highly appreciate your kind remarks πŸ™‚
      Lots of love
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    1. Hello Tracy,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Have a wonderful day ahead!
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  2. If you will try, I will try. That’s a good theme, Sanaa.
    Mrs. Jim is a Social Worker. If we each had a business she could counsel and if that didn’t work I could work on the divorce.
    ..

    1. Hello Jim,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Well you & Mrs. Jim would make an excellent team!
      xoxo

    1. Hello Patricia,

      Thanks for the huge compliment! So glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Have a great day ahead!
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    1. Hello Truedessa,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
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    1. Hello Rosemary,

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  3. There’re some instances when trying again is appropriate or tolerable and others definitely not.

    The repetition works well for the topic as I’m sure that’s probably how such a decision would cycle in one’s mind before deciding for good.

    Nicely gathered. πŸ™‚

    1. Hello Hannah,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love
      xoxo

    1. Hello Susie,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

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