Oblivious

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Thou shan’t be oblivious;
Concealed from the rest.
Emerge from the crowd;
Bloom among the best.

Lash out the insults;
Its what they do.
Thee spirit impassioned;
Pray not bid adieu.

Thou has been misread;
Alas! Much too long.
Heed not to sarcasm
The world where ye belong.

Thou shan’t be oblivious;
Concealed from the rest.
Emerge from the crowd;
Bloom among the best.

 

Photo Credits: vi.sualize.us

Posted for Poems in April @ Real Toads

26 thoughts on “Oblivious

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Hannah,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you agree 😀
      Highly appreciate your kind words 🙂
      xoxo

  1. Buddah Moskowitz says:

    I like this very much – this was how I started writing: when someone implored me to write. I found it gave me an identity and a voice. It saved my life and that’s what your poem reminds me of. Thanks, excellent poem.

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Moskowitz

      Thanks for stopping by 🙂
      Glad we share similar feelings regarding this poem.
      Highly appreciated!
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Debi,

      Thank you so much 🙂 Hopefully she will like my tribute as much as you did 😉
      Highly appreciate the compliment! 😀
      xoxo

  2. L. Moon says:

    You are a beautiful flower with so many petals of poetry yet to be revealed to the world. I for one look forward to the garden of verse that you have still hidden in your heart.

    You are a sun shine person on even the gloomiest of days!!

    holding one petal
    moon captivated by its glow
    poetry blooms

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Leslie,

      It was my pleasure to compose this particular piece in your honor 😀
      I hope to learn a lot more from you as I m still new to this world of poetry.
      There are so many forms to explore and write on.
      Glad you liked it sweetheart 😀
      Much love 🙂
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sherry,

      So glad you liked it 😀 It was very kind of all of you to take me in.. it feels like family 🙂
      Highly appreciate your kind words 😀
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Ella,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciate your kind words 🙂
      xoxo

  3. Jim says:

    “Bloom among the best” is a line I do like. It fits your good friend, L.Moon’s advice. I am glad too that he still reads your work and came for this one to encourage you some more.
    ..

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