Love transcends time and space;
Never was an emotion so pure.
The features of his chiseled face;
Wrapped me up in soft allure.
Never was an emotion so pure;
Followed by a fiery passion.
Wrapped me up in soft allure.
A deeper part of every action.
Followed by a fiery passion;
The features of his chiseled face.
A deeper part of every action.
Love transcends time and space.
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For an emotion so pure, we sure do jack up love at times dont we. Ha. Perhaps it is how we put our hands on love and try to shape it to meet our desires and definitions of love. We have been sold a view of love as well that became and ideal that we have to live up to. There is a pure love though that transcends the structures that we try to create of it – and that is a beautiful thing.
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Love can be transcendant. I think romantic love, when real, transcends, expands to all.
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a pure and giving love – nothing better than that but you don’t see it very often anymore these days… love me a dash of passion as well… and care…smiles
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Fiery passion and soft allure do make love so beautiful…love this Pantoum…
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How often we trade our passion for lesser things… maybe we get lost sometimes.
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Passion and love is everything. Nice piece to read indeed. How are you lovely? Hope life’s treating you well. Nice weekend!
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A passionate pantoum for sure, & blissfully shared, a sensual message not marred by antiquated form, but shining through as eternal truth, as more solution than conundrum.
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This is beautiful. I love the pantoum form and it works quite well here. You did a great job of writing the opening / ending line, which is, I think, the key to a good pantoum. Peace, Linda
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A wonderful sentiment – and a beautifully executed pantoum too! Good work!
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Yes, what you have written is so very true. Deep love definitely transcends time and space.
Great pantoum, Sanaa.
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Oh, lovely, a pantoum! And philosophy beautifully expressed. Well done. Thank you.
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Fun form.
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Love.. a multi-petaled flower reaching
up to higher levels.. in hues of color..
sometimes even shades
of black and white
and blue and red
for purple
Love
Now
All..:)
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Lovely use of the form.
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“Love transcends time and space” and blessed are those who find it and give it.
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I really like this pair of lines together:
“The features of his chiseled face;
Wrapped me up in soft allure.”
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of course love transcends, and lucky are those who are the happy participants of romantic love; have a nice Sunday Sanaa, and thank you for linking up at my Sunday Lime
much love…
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Love is the most open, yet also most missed, philosophy, isn’t it? ~
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PS: Yes it most certainly is 🙂
Interesting how such a pure emotion can be affected by a chiseled face. A wonderful piece.
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