Monsoon

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The massive downpour of rain;
Shall never cease to amaze.
While bound with a tender gaze;
We shall re-live the golden days.

Shall never cease to amaze;
The clouds clad in grey.
We shall re-live the golden days;
Setting our hearts ablaze.

The clouds clad in grey.
While bound with a tender gaze;
Setting our hearts ablaze.
The massive downpour of rain.

 

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Form: Pantoum

Posted on Poetics @ dVerse Poet’s Pub

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42 thoughts on “Monsoon

  1. X says:

    Well, we can hope the monsoon is gentle. I know it can be a relief from the heat. You added your own bit of heat with his gaze. Ha. Hope it was a sweet relief.

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  2. kelvin s.m. says:

    Sanaa, your poem today was a delight to read. I especially like the consistent rhymes line after line, and you do bring out the positive side of the monsoon. I have enjoyed it, thank you!

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  3. Gillena says:

    Luv your form in relating this poem; one cannot help but take it all in , not missing a single crumb

    Thank you for linking in at Monday WRites ; do have a blessed week

    Much love..

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