Memories

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Blissful memories;
Tangled knots.
Time has passed;
Running fast.
Look into mirror;
Tears flowing.
Hope and regrets;
Guidance through,
We shall survive.
I promise you.

You, I promise
Survive shall we.
Through guidance.
Regrets and hope;
Flowing tears.
Mirror into look;
Fast running,
Passed has time.
Knots tangled,
Memories blissful.

 

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Form: Palindrome

Posted on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

36 thoughts on “Memories

  1. Mary says:

    With all of the memories, I really hope the relationship will survive…even though there are some regrets to be overcome. You really did a good job with writing a palindrome poem! Smiles.

  2. Gabriella says:

    How nice that you wrote a palindrome too, Sanaa! I like what you did even though to me the second stanza feels less positive than the first as it ends on memories while the first one ends with a promise.

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gabriella,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, have a nice weekend!
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  3. Leo says:

    Another lovely palindrome. 🙂 Just been to Mary’s.

    Loved these lines:

    Tears flowing.
    Hope and regrets;
    Guidance through,
    We shall survive.
    I promise you.

    I liked the first verse better. It felt more in flow. 🙂

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Vinay,

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      Hello Gillena,

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      Hello Hank,

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      Hello Vandana,

      Thank you so much dear, so glad you liked it 🙂
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      Hello Colleen,

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      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
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      PS: No, its a random location, thought it would look cool with the poem 🙂

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