Thus amidst the rich and sweet array; she danced
with ribbon round her elfin finger. Lo! round and
round with amour who loved to nod and sing; sol
with bluebirds bring, the arrival of gallant Spring.
Lo! around Maypole as she heard the music play;
alongside velvet leaves and wind, the earth began
to sway. Such visions blessed each moment sweet;
among the crowd she blushed and smiled. Love is
but a conflict wild; with nature oft plain and pure.
Faerics twirl beneath the moon;
Whilst roses riot in their bloom.
Photo credits: sarah-vafidis.deviantart.com
Sweet and lyrical, a true Maypole dance,,
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What a vision!
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Woot! We made it through NaPoWriMo – that deserves a happy dance of it’s own!
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PS: Yes it certainly does 😀
Charming and elegant those dance moves around Maypole 🙂
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Lovely, especially the closing couplet..
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First of all, I’m in total LOVE with your last two lines. Then I must add that I adore the idea of the earth dancing. Such a beauty ❤
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I do love the feeling and sense of this.. you have caught the nature of the maypole dance and the magic of spring.
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Velvet leaves…and swaying earth….totally yummy 😀 XXX
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Beautiful. I especially love the closing couplet.
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Love your fairy/moon line!! Beautiful poem, Sanaa!
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Beautifully done, Sanaa, as ever 😉
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Beautiful, colorful dance of words.
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Great close! Congrats on finishing month. Thanks for kind visits. k.
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The May magic of your words.
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Oh! Those last lines are just gorgeous!
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beautiful May sentiments presented to us in a twirl
Have a happy Sunday Sanaa, thank you for linking to my Sunday Lime
much love…
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Reading this, I hated for it to be over, Sanaa. I loved the last two lines, Twirling Fabrics and Rioting Roses, though I can’t quite envision the antics of the roses.
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beautiful….the earth began to sway made me think of twirling around when I was young and the dizzying feeling…great write
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