Luoping

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Shrouded in the morning clouds;
Reclining farmlands of Luoping.
Far from the jostling crowds;
Hear the voice of maiden sing.
Clad in the colors of Irish rose;
She wove the garlands of repose.
The calming wind averts our gloom;
Golden rapeseed full in bloom.

Parallel to the sound of heart;
She gave her silent word to keep.
Announcing that she must depart;
She fled into the shadows deep.
Ignorant that the path ahead was steep.
Over the years as I assumed;
Sought to follow her trail, consumed.
Golden rapeseed full in bloom.

Long to hear her voice and sing;
As merry as the birds in Spring
Dejection causing heart to sting;
Alas! What changes time can bring.
Whisper of love’s a cherished thing;
A hundred years shall go to praise.
To fond memories with hope shall cling;
Golden rapeseed full in bloom.

A few could touch the magic strings;
Befuddle one with their glance.
Rising on its golden wings;
Golden rapeseed full in bloom.

 

Photo Credits:Β www.lazerhorse.org

Form: Ballade

“Though lovers be lost, love shall not.” _Dylan Thomas

On Transforming Friday @ Real Toads

& Open Link Night @ dVerse Poets Pub

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  1. charlie zero says:

    Sanaa, this poem is beautifully enchanting and written.
    When I read it, it sings with songs of hope and creativity.

    I really enjoy and love what you’ve written here.

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  2. katiemiafrederick says:

    Grandfather born in Ireland.. a Song
    of Irish Dance in my shoes.. a longing
    comes for me from ‘Titanic’.. THAT Irish
    Jig they do.. i don’t know if friend Maggie..
    somewhere.. 3+ Decades my Junior is Irish..
    But last night i am on A ‘Titanic’ Singing
    Dance of Irish Feat True.. This helping me..
    Remembering Fulfilling Dream.. Irish Maiden
    Song now.. Gold heArt is MineD for NOW..:)

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  3. Jannie Funster says:

    This one is a lovely song, with the refrain-like ending.

    I wonder what happened to the girl, vanished it seems. Even in the quiet innocent country there is dark mystery. Loved this!! And the Irish mention, nice touch.

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