Love

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Oh! Hwa art love?
If not a tempest!
Tis simply lies not,
In Β mere behest.

Donne love so ardent,
Entwined with desire!
Tis bargain leaving,
So much to enquire.

Oh! Hwa art love?
If not madness?
Tis paints upon,
A blank canvass!

For love sees only beauty,
A matter of time,
Before infringement,
Of duty.

Oh! Hwa art love?
If not alluring?
Tis simply has no time,
Of reassuring!

Alas! Love,
Tis so blind!
Inside thee heart,
Tis confined.

 

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46 thoughts on “Love

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Old Egg,

      Thanks for stopping by πŸ™‚
      Agreed, love makes world a much better place!
      Glad you liked it. Highly appreciated πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  1. Mary says:

    You have described love well… Yes, the best of love can be ardent and alluring, as well as a bit blind. Smiles. Hopefully the ardent love will last a long, long time!

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you dear πŸ™‚ Good to see you again!
      Glad you liked my poem πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated!
      xoxo

  2. kaykuala h says:

    A matter of time,
    Before infringement,
    Of duty.

    Love is meant to be shared and also to be given away. A matter of time before it is impacted by others and one gets disappointed. Great word usage Sanaa!

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gabriella,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciate your insight πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  3. Truedessa says:

    Love is blind, as reality sets in and cause heartache..view love with open eyes and then you will discover all aspects of love and desire. Lovely tone in the poem.

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Truedessa,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it dear πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciate your kind words πŸ™‚
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Donna,

      Glad you liked this one πŸ˜€ its my favorite too.. when in love we tend to paint the face of the beloved upon “a blank canvass”.
      Thanks for stopping by, have a nice day πŸ˜€
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sumana,

      So glad you liked it πŸ˜€ thank you for the compliment!
      Highly appreciated πŸ˜€ have a nice day πŸ˜€
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Magaly,

      Thank you my dear πŸ˜€ Highly appreciate your kind words πŸ™‚
      Thanks for stopping by, enjoy Sunday πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  4. Jamztoma says:

    Oh my, your poem is surely one beautiful and archaic piece I’ve enjoyed on this Sunday of 2015! Yes, you evoke the voices of Shakespeare and his colleagues. Great stuff!!! More please!!!

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Jamztoma,

      Thanks for stopping by, thank you for such a huge compliment πŸ™‚
      My work is usually inspired from Old poets I find them charming πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciate your kind words πŸ™‚
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated!
      Much love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Humbird,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it dear πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Happy Sunday πŸ˜€
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, well being in love or falling in love.. both has its own charm.. πŸ™‚
      Glad you liked it! Highly appreciated πŸ˜€

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello CC,

      Thank you for the huge compliment! Glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Lol..! Yeah that’s right.. damn! πŸ˜‰
      Thanks for stopping by πŸ˜€
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Totomai,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      You unraveled an important piece of the puzzle.
      Highly admire your insight πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  5. Kenn says:

    Oh how art love passionately blind before an empty canvas awaiting memories behest that midnight summer sky. Great poem and nice classy twist. πŸ™‚

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mr Meisner,

      Thank you, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated!
      Have a great week ahead πŸ™‚

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Eileen,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      External signs are definitely worth focusing upon πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciate your insight.
      xoxo

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