Across the magnificent hall;
A heart was thus stolen.
As eyes lifted to thine;
In one flashing moment.
The night strewn;
With starry sky.
Alas! Thee vision;
Had twisted awry.
Though words unspoken;
A hidden bond remained.
Sparks of fiery passion;
In features restrained.
To be able to touch;
Would have been sublime.
Alas! Igniting the soul;
The longing was confined!
Pray tell how long?
Till longing pacified?
Alas! thou knew not
Emotions intensified.
Across the magnificent hall;
A heart was thus stolen.
As eyes lifted to thine;
In one flashing moment.
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…’In one flashing moment’…sums its all pretty nicely. Love is everything and so much more!
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Oh I love the feeling of love at first sight.. wonderful
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Alas! thou knew not… A one sided-love affair is not good. He needs to open his eyes!
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Sometimes love needs time to emerge 😉 Glad you liked it!
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I’ve had moments like that and you captured it perfectly.
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really nice; just one glance can oft times do the trick
much love…
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Yes it often does 😉 Lots of love
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The essence of romance!
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A pleasant poem
Thanks for your visit and comment
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Ah, such longing.
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Ah yes.. the longing is thus the essence..! 😉
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Magical!
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The restraining element creates a wonderful tension 😉
“stolen” “spoken” “passion” all the things that spark a good romance 😀
Fantastic Ms. Sunshine
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“in one flashing moment” Love does seem to come lightening quick at times…beautiful
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one wonders about that moment ~
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Hey Sanaa–like a song. Thanks. k.
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A nice start, Sanaa, but then, … Some last long, others may merely be ‘infatuation’. I like the way you followed the formula. It works out good.
Thank you for peeking in on my ‘Legs’ too. My love poem is at a different place, here: http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2015/04/another-love-poem-day-21-of-napowrimo.html
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Such a beautiful and perfect romantic piece of poetry……………dissolving deep into hearts of lovers:)
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