Lost

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Unable to see the world;
The state makes me hurl.
Leaves around me swirl;
I lie in bed curled.

Unable to communicate;
Its hard enough to breathe.
Thoughts several accumulate;
Hoping to have bequeathed.

Unable to bid farewell;
So much left unsaid.
Lying as if under a spell;
Miserable heart has bled.

Unable to shed tears;
Lying lost forever.
Passed several years;
Discovered single letter.

Unable to control;
Overwhelmed by content.
His eyes downward scroll;
Burning with lament.

Unable to confess;
His unspoken love.
Trembling hand caress;
Shedding off his glove.

 

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Posted for Poems in April @ Real Toads

38 Replies to “Lost”

  1. Unable to bid farewell;
    So much left unsaid……. I’m afraid that would be many peoples response. Too bad if we wait too late.

  2. Lovely poem! I like what you did with the challenge by adding the “he” as a character and the narrator vocalizing for him! Thanks and viva la

    1. Hello Isadora,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it 😀
      It was a challenging prompt! Lots of love
      xoxo

    1. Hello Magaly,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked the poem 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 😀
      xoxo

    1. Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Have a wonderful day ahead!

    1. Hello Grapeling,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked the poem 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Enjoy the weekend 😀

  3. You have created a very real sense of pathos in this sad message.

    Congratulations on the many fine poems you wrote this month.

    1. Hello Kerry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

    1. Hello Ella,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked those offerings 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  4. I love the way you liken this to the season of fall when things fall away and are lost. The “single letter” creates a static tension for the reader.
    Well done Sanaa

    1. Hello Leslie,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

    1. Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it dear 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

    1. Hello Hannah,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

    1. Hello Susie,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  5. Congrats on your April writing! Whew! I’ve been glad to get to you know you a bit through your words this month. Hurray for that! And now… rest. 🙂

    1. Hello Marian,

      Thank you so much dear, it was a joyful experience 🙂
      I have learned so much among you all 😀
      Lots of love
      xoxo

    1. Hello Vandana,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it dear 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 😀
      xoxo

    1. Hello Blogoratti,

      Well well not bad 😀 you figured it out! 😉
      So glad you liked the poem! Lots of love
      xoxo

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