Lost

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Unable to see the world;
The state makes me hurl.
Leaves around me swirl;
I lie in bed curled.

Unable to communicate;
Its hard enough to breathe.
Thoughts several accumulate;
Hoping to have bequeathed.

Unable to bid farewell;
So much left unsaid.
Lying as if under a spell;
Miserable heart has bled.

Unable to shed tears;
Lying lost forever.
Passed several years;
Discovered single letter.

Unable to control;
Overwhelmed by content.
His eyes downward scroll;
Burning with lament.

Unable to confess;
His unspoken love.
Trembling hand caress;
Shedding off his glove.

 

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Posted for Poems in April @ Real Toads

38 thoughts on “Lost

  1. Debi Swim says:

    Unable to bid farewell;
    So much left unsaid……. I’m afraid that would be many peoples response. Too bad if we wait too late.

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you dear, well its 25 poems, started late πŸ™‚
      But I am ecstatic πŸ˜€ Lots of love
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  2. Isadora Gruye says:

    Lovely poem! I like what you did with the challenge by adding the “he” as a character and the narrator vocalizing for him! Thanks and viva la

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Isadora,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      It was a challenging prompt! Lots of love
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Magaly,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked the poem πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Have a wonderful day ahead!

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Grapeling,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked the poem πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Enjoy the weekend πŸ˜€

  3. Kerry O'Connor says:

    You have created a very real sense of pathos in this sad message.

    Congratulations on the many fine poems you wrote this month.

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Kerry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Ella,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked those offerings πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  4. L. Moon says:

    I love the way you liken this to the season of fall when things fall away and are lost. The “single letter” creates a static tension for the reader.
    Well done Sanaa

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Leslie,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it dear πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Hannah,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Susie,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  5. Marian says:

    Congrats on your April writing! Whew! I’ve been glad to get to you know you a bit through your words this month. Hurray for that! And now… rest. πŸ™‚

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Marian,

      Thank you so much dear, it was a joyful experience πŸ™‚
      I have learned so much among you all πŸ˜€
      Lots of love
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Vandana,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it dear πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Blogoratti,

      Well well not bad πŸ˜€ you figured it out! πŸ˜‰
      So glad you liked the poem! Lots of love
      xoxo

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