Poesy as though a fragrant breeze
Swept me from shade to sunshine
(Addled) my heart paused to breathe
While acerb things conduce to sweet
Poesy as though stirring rose
Lead me from dolour to hope
(Poised) my heart observes with glee
As spirit absolved rose wild and free
Poesy (complacent) with azure wings
I found her (not) rather she found me
Photo credits: Fine Art America
Posted for Poetics @ dverse Poets Pub
Posted on Sunday Lime @ Lunch Break
The celebration of a blooming. YES.
Thank you so much, De ❤️ good to see you 😀
Honest, sweet & accurate–for many, if not most, of the greatest things, moments & people in life find us soon after we cease working so hard to find them!
Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Glenn 😀
From shade to sunshine, I like the transformation Sanaa ~ Thanks for celebrating with us ~
My pleasure, Grace ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
I love the sentiment here. Reminds me that in order to find, we must often stop looking.Thank You.
Thank you so much, Paul 🙂 so glad you agree ❤️
A celebration of poetry as hope and light! I like the way you placed certain words in parentheses, which made me think about them: addled, poised and complacent. A beautiful image of poetry as a stirring rose, Sanaa!
Thank you so much Kim ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
lovely…rhythmic….!!
Thank you so much, Sreeja 🙂 good to see you.
Love how some of the most delightful things in life seem to find us, and not the other way around.
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Bryan
What a lovely poem! A lovely read this morning. And thank you!
Jane
Thank you so much, Jane ❤️ good to see you 🙂
What a lovely way to be found 🙂
Thank you so much, Ellecee ? so glad you like it 🙂
Celebration in bloom! Sheer loveliness.
Thank you so much, Wintermoon ? good to see you 🙂
What a delight to celebrate the words like that.
Definitely ? thanks for stopping by, Bjorn 🙂
I see this as a celebration of the subtle changes in nature that reflect those in our own lives…seasons.
Thank you so much, Victoria ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
I love the softness and rhythm of this…..and the heart described as “poised” 😉
Thank you so much, Kathleen ❤️ good to see you 🙂
most beautiful the white rose .bloomed with your so precious thoughts ,amazing delight
Thank you kindly, Shabana ❤️ good to see you 🙂
Upon reading your poem (twice) I leave gladdened and hopeful. Thank you.
That’s wonderful! 😀 Thank you for your kind words, Mark 🙂