A Dash of Sunny
Poetry, Previous Poems
Photo credits: ink361.com
November 6, 2015 at 4:39 am
This is excellent.
I love the “ash” inside “wash” … the painted lips (what a gorgeous picture) … the “b” and the “p” in the second appearance of “p(aint)” at the end with the extra white space around them (it turns into blood-pressure, for me … So full control over one’s blood-pressure speaks to meditating and making healthy choices to overcome unhealthy desires. That’s what I take away from this piece.
November 6, 2015 at 4:51 am
Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.
Glenn Buttkus says
November 6, 2015 at 4:52 am
Terrific sensual imaginative Jambing; fun & stirring using several forms of enjambment, keeping us hopping along with the unique rhythm of the piece. I like the lines /ad-just with thorns/the fear-less ones/the world ad-orns/.
November 6, 2015 at 4:57 am
De Jackson (WhimsyGizmo) says
November 6, 2015 at 5:26 am
What a gorgeous visual, coupled with your piece. I love all the space and movement you’ve created here, and the double verb in blooms/looms (I have never noticed that one before – it ROCKS!)
Also love the negation of the verb “paint” simply by setting off “aint.” And that “just with thorns.” Just wonderful.
November 6, 2015 at 5:29 am
Hello De Jackson,
Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
November 6, 2015 at 6:15 am
I like the giving in to desire, specially with b(looms) and p(aint) ~ Stunning visual as well Sanaa (my alter ego loves it) ~
November 6, 2015 at 6:26 am
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November 6, 2015 at 7:14 am
Well done, Sanaa. You worked your words and their arrangement well. I like the idea of desire painting your mind and soul!
November 6, 2015 at 7:46 am
Wonderful arrangement of words, and use of enjambment is well done. There is a really nice flow to it. 🙂
November 6, 2015 at 4:59 pm
Linda Kruschke says
November 6, 2015 at 10:22 am
Nice use of enjambment.
November 6, 2015 at 10:50 am
This is excellent… No pain in that paint. – a kiss like this – and a confidence growing in togetherness.
November 6, 2015 at 5:00 pm
Sabio Lantz says
November 6, 2015 at 4:10 pm
Refreshingly pro-world, pro-senses, pro-pleasure.
Great picture to go with the indulgent words
November 6, 2015 at 5:01 pm
Carol Campbell says
November 6, 2015 at 9:15 pm
This is a journey of surprising meanings. Delightful!
November 6, 2015 at 9:35 pm
November 9, 2015 at 7:32 pm
“The fearless ones the world adorns”; ah yes passionate love needs that leap of risk; luv this daring little write
Thank you for linking up at Monday WRites Sanaa
November 9, 2015 at 8:04 pm
Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
November 10, 2015 at 1:14 pm
the fear-less ones / the world ad-orns
quite like how you split this up, Sanaa ~
November 10, 2015 at 3:11 pm
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