Collection of thoughts

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Life is made of several moments;
Echo: Omens
Of choices and paths which we have chosen.
Echo: Zen

Though life at times does not seem fair;
Echo: Air
Leave the shade to step into the glare.
Echo: Lair

A laugh does chime in a sea of sadness;
Echo: Nest
Tugs at the heart like a piece of magnet.
Echo: Net

Thoughts stride into the mind and heart;
Echo: Art
Is love in actual – unification of parts.
Echo: Parts

The question remains to lead or follow;
Echo: Low
Truth is sometimes hard to swallow.
Echo: Allow

We live our life like there’s no tomorrow;
Echo: Morrow
Refuse to wander in the fields of sorrow.
Echo: Sorrow

 

 

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Form: Echo Verse

Posted on Meeting the Bar @ dVerse Poets Pub

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52 thoughts on “Collection of thoughts

  1. Mary says:

    Sanaa, what an excellent message in your Echo Verse! Though life does not sometimes seem fair, it really is good not to wander in the fields of sorrow too long. Really, I am impressed with your well-chosen echoes!

  2. Gabriella says:

    You are a master of the form, Sanaa. My favorite stanzas are the opening and closing ones. Life is indeed a series of choices and paths and it is great to be aware that we often have alternatives.

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gabriella,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a lovely week ahead.
      xoxo

  3. Glenn Buttkus says:

    What a lovely “collection” of stanzas. Your choice of echoes is likewise superb; interesting the echo changes we all chose. I like your line /a laugh does chime in a sea of sadness/.

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sabio,

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      Highly appreciated, have a nice weekend πŸ™‚

  4. Sumana Roy says:

    a strong and beautiful message to live this life meaningfully….the form and content both compliment each other…such an excellent poem Sanaa….thank you for this post….

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mishunderstood,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, have a nice weekend πŸ™‚

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Victoria,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
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    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Kanzen,

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  5. Abhra says:

    So many favourite lines there for me…

    A laugh does chime in a sea of sadness;
    Echo: Nest

    and then

    Truth is sometimes hard to swallow.
    Echo: Allow

    A wonderfully crafted poem…

    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Thotpurge,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  6. gillena says:

    Sanaa I like this form. I will try writing one. I also like the message you delivered. So well summarized in the last verse

    Thanks for dropping in at my blog ‘verses’ today

    Much love…

    • adashofsunny says:

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    • adashofsunny says:

      Hello Bekkie,

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