Collection of thoughts

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Life is made of several moments;
Echo: Omens
Of choices and paths which we have chosen.
Echo: Zen

Though life at times does not seem fair;
Echo: Air
Leave the shade to step into the glare.
Echo: Lair

A laugh does chime in a sea of sadness;
Echo: Nest
Tugs at the heart like a piece of magnet.
Echo: Net

Thoughts stride into the mind and heart;
Echo: Art
Is love in actual – unification of parts.
Echo: Parts

The question remains to lead or follow;
Echo: Low
Truth is sometimes hard to swallow.
Echo: Allow

We live our life like there’s no tomorrow;
Echo: Morrow
Refuse to wander in the fields of sorrow.
Echo: Sorrow

 

 

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Form: Echo Verse

Posted on Meeting the Bar @ dVerse Poets Pub

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52 Replies to “Collection of thoughts”

  1. Sanaa, what an excellent message in your Echo Verse! Though life does not sometimes seem fair, it really is good not to wander in the fields of sorrow too long. Really, I am impressed with your well-chosen echoes!

  2. You are a master of the form, Sanaa. My favorite stanzas are the opening and closing ones. Life is indeed a series of choices and paths and it is great to be aware that we often have alternatives.

    1. Hello Gabriella,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a lovely week ahead.
      xoxo

  3. What a lovely “collection” of stanzas. Your choice of echoes is likewise superb; interesting the echo changes we all chose. I like your line /a laugh does chime in a sea of sadness/.

  4. a strong and beautiful message to live this life meaningfully….the form and content both compliment each other…such an excellent poem Sanaa….thank you for this post….

    1. Hello Mishunderstood,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, have a nice weekend 🙂

  5. So many favourite lines there for me…

    A laugh does chime in a sea of sadness;
    Echo: Nest

    and then

    Truth is sometimes hard to swallow.
    Echo: Allow

    A wonderfully crafted poem…

  6. Sanaa I like this form. I will try writing one. I also like the message you delivered. So well summarized in the last verse

    Thanks for dropping in at my blog ‘verses’ today

    Much love…

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