Blitz

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Blitz caused soul to writhe while heart
was cleft with pain and rage. His eyes
malicious bade mine to stare and thus
smoke, amidst the blood and thunder,
sheds faint odor throughout the air.

Rain pours down soft as though drops 
of courage and urge me out from dark
despair. Breathing from trembling lips 
a prayer, until era of dawn, rose out as
spear. Thus path ahead beamed fervid 
and clear.

Seemed as though the devil fears;
To see us tread with bold austere.

 

Photo credits: imgur.com

Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United

20 thoughts on “Blitz

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Susan,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Krishna,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  1. Old Egg says:

    Now this is dramatic and so apt in these times unbelievable carnage throughout the world as innocent people are bullied to raise a universal fear. Rain is a comforter and a sign of hope and resolve for the future. Let’s hope it pours down where it is needed soon.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Old Egg,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  2. kaykuala h says:

    prayer until era of dawn rose out as
    spear. Hence path ahead fervid and
    clear.

    A prayer can effectively make a difference. Faith is the underlying element to think of in pursuing happiness!

    Hank

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Luk Lei,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  3. Jae Rose says:

    I like this shift in style Sanaa – it pierces like rain and soothes like a cloud – particularly love the idea that we can smell blood and thunder in the air..like trouble brewing.

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